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Wednesday, December 15, 2010

assignment17

assighment from miss P's

a.) the 2 thing from Greg and Beth Ann are that a poem is a song or a writing with a beat. the 2th thing i learned was that is slam, it is a poety thing were who ever has the best poem wins.

b.) will the first thing was that we can do the same poem for the bully poem we had to do.
 the 2th thing was watching Ty and playing games. and the last ting was the bug that i found dead.

c.) will the first was the poem being printed and the other thing was the thing i added at the end.

d.) before i will i was happy until i was picked and than i got scared.

e.) after i was happy and scared.

f.) will i would change the chair part and next time do some actions.

g.)the first thing is the words used but the best is every body tryed.

2.)
MY Chair
My chair is my best friend, all I do is sit and watch Ty ,play games and think about school.
Now that is what my parents think is useless, but I do it cause I like it. I turn my chair to a wall, and thinked but the wall tuned pink as a flower, but than it turn red anger at bullies who will steel others money and lunches but I say if I was bigger than them I would teach them a lesson but I'm just a bug to them, a bug about to get beat up. The wall turns white and I have know idea what to do. The next color is going to yellow and that is where I tell a teacher. Than wall turn blue time to go to sleep but now I not scared, to go out there like a Strong man. a Strong man who will fight for others and free them from chains holding them back, but my question is will they help, fight back and win or seek pay back.

Friday, December 10, 2010

Assignment #15 - Slam Poets Response

3 things that you are looking forward to learning, developing or using in your poetry over the course of our Slam workshops.
2 things that Greg or Beth Anne reinforced that we have already been doing in class, or you are already using in your own writing.
1 poem that you wrote yesterday. Here is your chance to continue to work on step 1 of the 3 step poetry writing process (step 1 - write, revise, edit and proofread, step 2 - memorize, so you can connect with the audience, step 3 - perform!). Take some time to polish your poem from the 10 minutes of writing you did yesterday.
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3.) will a unfortunately have 3 things, the 1st thing is I want to learn how to use poetry to make more  descriptive words.2 i want him to rap and sing. 3 i want them to tell us were we get our ideas from.

2.) 1 is that you can express your feelings in a poem. 2 is it would be what ever you want it to be also a poem is a song or a rap

1i am working on it on paper

1000 awesome things

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I think it's awesome when, Christmas lights are on construction cranes and the way it looks because i think it funny and also i have never seen them on a construction crames before.

My 1000 awesome things

1000 i think awesome when you buy a new car and it has that new car smell.
999 i also think it is awesome when you in a turck and your sitting next to the  driver  and he/she think's your tied so when they see a bump they speed up the truck to cheer you up but not only  that they can go hours with out eating but the best thing is that when your driving in a truck is at night when your about to come to the city and light are on and your looking down at the cars and buildings. bright light! but the best is about some truck are they have two beds but you know what is better my crazy cousin have a TV installed.  but wait unit you see has car.